After trying out smoke for my producer, he gave me some great feedback.
1. Don’t draw the lighter.
2. Take the pen out of play sooner.
So, now my sequence is:
1. Intro about pictionary/charades.
2. Mouth zipper gag.
3. Take out pen, cap in left hand.
4. Draw Square.
5. Place pen in mouth/drag.
6. Place paper on left hand palm.
7. Take pen from mouth, draw tobacco/drugs.
8. Put pen away.
9. Roll cigarette/joint.
10. Light cigarette/joint.
11. Take invisible lighter from pocket.
12. Light invisi-joint, release smoke.
I did some thinking one night, and realized I can actually do it twice. So, that’s 13- show mouth empty, 14- release second batch of smoke. Showed it to Tony, he dug it.





